ASEA has taken a bit of a beating on this blog recently so I’ll refrain from pointing out that it’s just salt water.
This post is about language – spelling and grammar – and how to present yourself and your business opportunity professionally in a crowded and jaded marketplace.
I stumbled on a press release from an eager ASEA rep earlier today – read the whole press release over at PRLog.
Here’s some excerpts:
Home base business in booming as they introduce the world to ASEA. Athletes tested are able to continue to get the benefits as the results of the test are clean!
With ASEA getting such great test results, home base business’s will have a huge boost income while helping athletes of all ages achieve higher goals while staying healthy!
The team at ASEA has captured this and in now turning the heads of athletes and trainers alike.
Lesson? If you’re going to write a press release and submit it to a PR site please use a spell checker and a grammar checker. Or get someone to proofread your work.
For those of you who are seeking the truth about ASEA…..
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The comments here at MLMBlog are meant for discussion, not for promoting a press release. – ed